03-02-2013, 08:43 PM
amenable! Too cute, Leanne. (could not resist, forgive me.) And now to the poem.
Not to angrify our queen bee (;-):
I love this poem.
These two lines e.g.:
"But it drew cleansing water from clean soil,
And slowly turned pure white."
"turned pure white" is great imo..
I am also impressed by the way you open stanza 4: the "If". To me that is unique.
Not to angrify our queen bee (;-):
I love this poem.
These two lines e.g.:
"But it drew cleansing water from clean soil,
And slowly turned pure white."
"turned pure white" is great imo..
I am also impressed by the way you open stanza 4: the "If". To me that is unique.