03-02-2013, 07:28 AM
(03-02-2013, 04:42 AM)Leanne Wrote: Please consider having this moved to Serious Critique -- aside from the double-spaced format, which of course is very easily fixed, this is an excellent poem that if you're amenable would stand up quite well to more in-depth criticism than we allow in the Novice forum.Thanks, will do.

