Solitude

[Wildcard]

Hi Leanne,

I was gonna try to skip all the other crit and try to do it that way but that caused me to misunderstand the italics and I was trying to read it as one continuous thought so I had to read the crit to get it.

Maybe parentheses? Or some other way to make it more clear what is happening?

tbh I liked the old way better

I love 'drown in sediment and stone' and 'reflected shadows' . . . you never fail to impress.

EDIT: oops I typed that wrong :p

Thanks for sharing.