My livingroom revolution

[PoetryAndPhysics]

I like the change of perspective in the last line; we’re sitting in the mundane, contemplating revolution (I think of Lennon’s Revolution and Come Together, but digressing). I agree that this could be better thought out. Images, for example: we’re given tea, tv, and coffee, all not really carrying their weight (just including “living room” in the title basically does what they do). Even mundane images should be better dressed than these, I think. Also I don't really get the wording of the carbinets line. But this is definitely a good idea, worth revisiting.

(FYI, I'm guilty of what I just described all the time; I think it just means more time has to be put in, every word contemplated, ... kk, think that's all for now)