02-27-2013, 11:28 PM
for such a short poem you should really check for spelling errors
i enjoyed the brevity of the poem and the last two lines have a certain oomph
i enjoyed the brevity of the poem and the last two lines have a certain oomph
(02-27-2013, 09:23 PM)escorial Wrote: you can share my biscuts biscuits
drink my tea
watch my t.v
listen to the radio
coffee and cream to i'm struggling with this line and the next.
the drinks cabinets free cabinet's
we'll sort this world out
in my livingroom revolution
