02-23-2013, 05:24 AM
This poem being what it is, and in the Novice section, maybe you could branch off into another poem about that first world and third world subject.
As a challenge. Seeing that many lost love poems usually just explode out of us. If you're new to poetry or whatever...you could take on that first world hurt subject you hinted at in this one and expand on it.
As a challenge. Seeing that many lost love poems usually just explode out of us. If you're new to poetry or whatever...you could take on that first world hurt subject you hinted at in this one and expand on it.