My Poison
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I've tried to tidy up the rhythm...I think S3 might be the worst for rhythm, and some forced rhyme...

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What's my poison that I take,
to make this pain less real?
It's taken four times daily,
Recommended with no meal.
The first dose is on waking,
A glass half full with coke,
Taken with some painkiller,
the agony away it soaks.

What's my poison that I take,
To make me so calm and fly?
It's taken with a needle,
Guaranteed an instant high.
The second dose is at noon,
Before the shadows appear
Into my wretched vein,
Vile blood, they disappear.

What's my poison that I take,
To feed this empty soul?
Taken to kill the hunger,
White powder snorted whole.
Third dose instead of dinner,
Emptiness gone for a while
Confidence to conquer,
Energy to go that extra mile.

What's that poison that I take,
To finally end it all?
It is all of the above,
Guaranteed to crash and fall.
The fourth dose taken in bed,
To keep those nightmares at bay
Never to awake again,
Dreamworld forever to stay.


**original**
What's my poison that I take, to make this pain less real?
It's taken 4 times daily, recommended without a meal.
The first dose is upon waking, a glass half full with coke,
Taken with some painkiller, the agony away it soaks.

What's my poison that I take, to make me calm and fly?
It's taken with a needle, guaranteed an instant high.
The second dose is at noon, before the shadows begin to appear
Into my wretched vein, the vile blood makes them disappear.

What's my poison that I take, to feed this empty soul?
It's taken to kill the hunger, white powder snorted whole.
The third dose instead of dinner, emptiness vanishes for a while
Confidence to conquer, and energy to go that extra mile.

What's that poison that I take, to finally end it all?
It's all of the above, guaranteed to crash and fall.
The 4th dose taken in bed, to keep those nightmares at bay
Never to awake, in the dreamworld forever to stay.

Invisible Shadows 2012
"We are the music makers
And we are the dreamers of dreams
Wandering by lone sea breakers
And sitting by desolate streams" ~ Arthur O'Shaughnessy


http://invisibleshadows86.blogspot.co.uk/
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