a likely story.

[newsclippings]

and he loves me while i you
and you love her,
but she left you and
you me.

Apposite. This needs nothing adding or taking away. Does what it says on the tin and covers me in one coat. There is a captured adolescence in the language used and though I may baulk at the small "i" I dare not suggest it is a typo in case it has some teen-talk to which I am no longer privy
I reminds me of:
Said him to me,"Is that you?"
Said I,"Who?"
Said he,"You."
Said I, "No."
Said he, "My,
It's awfie' like you."

Scottish mother poem.
Best,
well done,
tectak

I used all lower-case because the situation seems insignificant to me. Thank you for the 'pliments do.

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This is a simply stated but convoluted little piece and it's loaded with emotion -- as if it's too painful to go into more detail. Clever!

thank you. getting complimented by someone who knows how to write poetry makes me all gushy inside.

does this mean i'll never make you gushy

clever seems to be the word of choice and i agree.
i'm just glad i wasn't drunk when i read it.

Everything I write seems to be situational with you.
and you can make me gushy smush smush adkladjsf whatamidoing.