Solitude

[hobbit86]

I try and avoid writing critiques in the serious section just because I can't begin to add anything on the level of criticism expected in this thread...but I love reading the poems in this section...and just have to say (although it's got no constructive criticism), I love the tone of this poem. The reorganisation of the 2nd version is much better than the first. Absolutely love the imagery thanks for such a good read