02-16-2013, 08:03 AM
hi jormungandre
at present i get the used book them being used, that they stand erect on the shelf waiting to be read. the last stanza, the smell of old books, other than that or if not that it's a sex poem. for me, it's a little too ambiguous. the text is well write but i sruggle with their intent.
great to see you posting poetry and giving feedback
at present i get the used book them being used, that they stand erect on the shelf waiting to be read. the last stanza, the smell of old books, other than that or if not that it's a sex poem. for me, it's a little too ambiguous. the text is well write but i sruggle with their intent.
great to see you posting poetry and giving feedback
(02-16-2013, 05:28 AM)jormungandr Wrote: Frayed by fingers
falls, fumbles. These
pages yearn to leave
unbounded, quick as leaves leaves/leaves not sure, are they're too much alike to work
Weathered by sweat
as mountains by snow.
Stand erect, waiting
still, for him.
Emanating odors
of shriveled bones,
leaving memories
entwined in ink.