Conversation With the Magician’s Rabbit (revision)

[billy]

The title is excellent, nothing that wasn't me being picku, the heat line is the only one i struggled with. other than that i found it to be an excellent read. really tight

You see what you think would this line look better on it's own? maybe as the 3rd line?
is the Red Queen creased
by the hand of God.

You look to his hands
expecting
a grifter's sleight.

I am not some shiny coin
to pluck from behind an ear.
I am like the cat in the box
(in two states) waiting would waiting work inside the brackets (waiting in two states)
for quantum certainty.

The universe is cold
silk and brimmed
with heat death. heat death sort of threw me

Your stories give us watches.
We are late, ever late.
Even this is perception. love this and the next two lines, it rounds off the references to alice

I speak a mystery;
there is no hat.