dark room, heavy mind

[hobbit86]

I like this poem because I can relate..."the lowered guard", the "shattered dreams", the "shell of a person". Memories that torment and overwhelm. It is vivid and emotional.

But I personally find it easier to read poems with a more 'structured' look. Whether it is rhyme, structure etc...Free poetry (is that the correct term) is very popular these days however, so it is just my personal choice.

Also, for whatever reason this emotion and poem this was written, I hope the pain eases and that you can come out from behind the shadows of yourself and reach those dreams again