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Valentines Poem (Revision)
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02-13-2013, 10:05 AM
Well, this isn't really a good poem. It's extremely cheesy and the language employed, to be completely honest, is not very effective. The lack of punctuation is something you can improve on too. However, if she's not an uptight literature student, she'll most likely appreciate the effort and be happy for the gesture. Not sure about the use of 'hoes' though. =)
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Valentines Poem (Revision) - by twoneight - 02-07-2013, 02:06 PM
RE: Valentines Poem (Revision) - by Todd - 02-13-2013, 08:24 PM
RE: Valentines Poem - by billy - 02-07-2013, 06:28 PM
RE: Valentines Poem - by Jae Mc Donnell - 02-08-2013, 03:52 AM
RE: Valentines Poem - by abu nuwas - 02-08-2013, 05:03 AM
RE: Valentines Poem - by nothing_good16 - 02-13-2013, 01:35 AM
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