Past Perfect by hamartia

Past Perfect by hamartia

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02-11-2013, 04:55 AM

Gorgeous poem. I missed it initially. Thanks for spotlighting it. What she did with that edit was impressive. Relative clause made all the difference. Great workshopping.

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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Past Perfect by hamartia - by Leanne - 02-11-2013, 04:46 AM

RE: Past Perfect by hamartia - by Todd - 02-11-2013, 04:55 AM

RE: Past Perfect by hamartia - by hamartia - 02-11-2013, 07:45 AM

RE: Past Perfect by hamartia - by Leanne - 02-11-2013, 08:02 AM

RE: Past Perfect by hamartia - by billy - 02-11-2013, 11:04 AM

RE: Past Perfect by hamartia - by serge gurkski - 02-12-2013, 01:35 AM

RE: Past Perfect by hamartia - by tectak - 02-17-2013, 05:52 AM

RE: Past Perfect by hamartia - by newsclippings - 02-27-2013, 02:32 AM

RE: Past Perfect by hamartia - by UnofficiallyMe - 03-21-2013, 12:11 AM

RE: Past Perfect by hamartia - by AlexSharp - 04-27-2013, 11:23 AM

RE: Past Perfect by hamartia - by ChristopherSea - 08-19-2013, 11:02 PM

RE: Past Perfect by hamartia - by Bemh - 12-09-2013, 08:21 AM

RE: Past Perfect by hamartia - by Todd - 02-09-2017, 02:47 AM

RE: Past Perfect by hamartia - by ellajam - 02-09-2017, 03:54 AM

RE: Past Perfect by hamartia - by Achebe - 02-12-2017, 05:55 AM

RE: Past Perfect by hamartia - by RiverNotch - 02-15-2017, 10:40 AM

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