02-10-2013, 09:29 AM
It flows very nicely and has a pleasant rhythm to it; this juxtaposed with the content of the poem is quite interesting.
I especially enjoyed the last two lines.
I especially enjoyed the last two lines.
|
Thoughtlessness kills
|
|
« Next Oldest | Next Newest »
|
| Messages In This Thread |
|
Thoughtlessness kills - by Bizzy - 02-10-2013, 03:49 AM
RE: Thoughtlessness kills - by serge gurkski - 02-10-2013, 04:04 AM
RE: Thoughtlessness kills - by Smiffy - 02-10-2013, 09:09 AM
RE: Thoughtlessness kills - by TJJackson93 - 02-10-2013, 09:29 AM
RE: Thoughtlessness kills - by heslopian - 02-12-2013, 01:44 AM
RE: Thoughtlessness kills - by Bizzy - 02-12-2013, 11:55 PM
RE: Thoughtlessness kills - by brandontoh - 02-13-2013, 09:49 AM
|
Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)