Thoughtlessness kills
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(02-10-2013, 03:49 AM)Bizzy Wrote:  I killed him ‘cause he left
His bristles in the sink,
He didn’t even notice -
He didn’t even think.

I slit his bastard throat -
His parents were to blame,
A knife that they presented
The day I took his name.

Hate filled the days between
The treadmill and the vow
Our bark holed ‘neath the water
Still floating until now.

What was it that became
The famous camel’s straw?
Bristles peppering the sink -
Lie silted there no more.
On first read I'm quite impressed. what I can tell you right now is that I dig the undertone ;- )

"Bristles peppering the sink -
Lie silted there no more.
" ;-)
cheers
Serge
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Messages In This Thread
Thoughtlessness kills - by Bizzy - 02-10-2013, 03:49 AM
RE: Thoughtlessness kills - by serge gurkski - 02-10-2013, 04:04 AM
RE: Thoughtlessness kills - by Smiffy - 02-10-2013, 09:09 AM
RE: Thoughtlessness kills - by TJJackson93 - 02-10-2013, 09:29 AM
RE: Thoughtlessness kills - by heslopian - 02-12-2013, 01:44 AM
RE: Thoughtlessness kills - by Bizzy - 02-12-2013, 11:55 PM
RE: Thoughtlessness kills - by brandontoh - 02-13-2013, 09:49 AM



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