02-07-2013, 06:28 PM
we don't do the poll thanks to say if you're good or bad, that would be too easy 
no need for introducing the poem unless it's in a forign language and no one will understand it.
no need for introducing the poem unless it's in a forign language and no one will understand it.
(02-07-2013, 02:06 PM)twoneight Wrote: She has a really good sense of humor thats why the "hoes" line is in there....im a bad poet so help or tell me if its good or bad haha
it's okay and she'll love it, but....it isn't great poetry. that said, if it's to make her smile, i'm sure it'll succeed. try and make it less wordy.
Theres something different about you Rose
You have the best laugh and are VERY pretty and funny
You don’t compare to those other hoes
I hope that in the NEAR future ill have the honor to call you “my honey”
And by near future I mean now, will you be my girlfriend?....
Just know that whatever you say
I will still think of you as a great friend
But in all seriousness… happy Valentines Day