02-07-2013, 02:06 PM
I know im a bad poet but would this make a 16 year old girl smile/ laugh....will she like it???
Revision
There’s something different about you Rose
Your funny and gorgeous and your laugh, I love
you don’t compare to those other hoes
Out of all the girls I see you always sit above
I wouldn’t trade our friendship for the universe
you are amazing in every way
your truly unique and diverse
Happy Valentines Day
_______________________________
She has a really good sense of humor thats why the "hoes" line is in there....im a bad poet so help or tell me if its good or bad haha
Original
Theres something different about you Rose
You have the best laugh and are VERY pretty and funny
You don’t compare to those other hoes
I hope that in the NEAR future ill have the honor to call you “my honey”
And by near future I mean now, will you be my girlfriend?....
Just know that whatever you say
I will still think of you as a great friend
But in all seriousness… happy Valentines Day
Revision
There’s something different about you Rose
Your funny and gorgeous and your laugh, I love
you don’t compare to those other hoes
Out of all the girls I see you always sit above
I wouldn’t trade our friendship for the universe
you are amazing in every way
your truly unique and diverse
Happy Valentines Day
_______________________________
She has a really good sense of humor thats why the "hoes" line is in there....im a bad poet so help or tell me if its good or bad haha
Original
Theres something different about you Rose
You have the best laugh and are VERY pretty and funny
You don’t compare to those other hoes
I hope that in the NEAR future ill have the honor to call you “my honey”
And by near future I mean now, will you be my girlfriend?....
Just know that whatever you say
I will still think of you as a great friend
But in all seriousness… happy Valentines Day