02-07-2013, 05:22 AM
(02-07-2013, 05:05 AM)hamartia Wrote: Should it be morning's in L4? And the crow, as an image, comes out of nowhere a bit. Which is not to say I don't like it, I'm just not sure I understand why it's -that-, specifically. I agree with the comment about capitalisation, too, but other than that, I found it really compelling!Yea, it's supposed to be morning's instead of mornings. An idea behind the poem was to separate light and dark, or day and night, with the rhyme scheme, culminating with death as the days run out. I think you're right though, the crow is far from ideal. Thanks for the comments.