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The walk is chalk'd and barren dry
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02-07-2013, 05:05 AM
Should it be morning's in L4? And the crow, as an image, comes out of nowhere a bit. Which is not to say I don't like it, I'm just not sure I understand why it's -that-, specifically. I agree with the comment about capitalisation, too, but other than that, I found it really compelling!
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The walk is chalk'd and barren dry - by Bridgehead - 02-07-2013, 02:14 AM
RE: The walk is chalk'd and barren dry - by serge gurkski - 02-07-2013, 02:26 AM
RE: The walk is chalk'd and barren dry - by Bridgehead - 02-07-2013, 03:17 AM
RE: The walk is chalk'd and barren dry - by serge gurkski - 02-07-2013, 03:42 AM
RE: The walk is chalk'd and barren dry - by hamartia - 02-07-2013, 05:05 AM
RE: The walk is chalk'd and barren dry - by Bridgehead - 02-07-2013, 05:22 AM
RE: The walk is chalk'd and barren dry - by billy - 02-07-2013, 06:20 PM
RE: The walk is chalk'd and barren dry - by serge gurkski - 02-07-2013, 07:37 PM
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