The walk is chalk'd and barren dry
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(02-07-2013, 02:26 AM)serge gurkski Wrote:  I think I just read poetry!

thank you for the read.

except maybe for the line-starting caps.
Could not do without a nit. ,-)

cheers

the gurk

cheers

was a bit tongue in cheek, but i really like this
Thanks. I don't have any reason for using caps beyond emulating other poems I have read. I'll have to think about why that's the case.
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The walk is chalk'd and barren dry - by Bridgehead - 02-07-2013, 02:14 AM
RE: The walk is chalk'd and barren dry - by Bridgehead - 02-07-2013, 03:17 AM
RE: The walk is chalk'd and barren dry - by Bridgehead - 02-07-2013, 05:22 AM
RE: The walk is chalk'd and barren dry - by billy - 02-07-2013, 06:20 PM



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