Need Some advice! on Poetry free verse
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need some help i dont know if my poem makes sense im new to this stuff but im loving it! please help!

What a strong emotion love is
Stronger than the oceans current
Like the current it is ever changing
Pulling and pushing people around
Like a bully at a schools steel jungle
Love is never clear just like
Driving through thick fog
Love is a warzone in our time
You must fight for this Euphoria
Or be forever alone in life.
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Need Some advice! on Poetry free verse - by welrzbmw - 02-06-2013, 04:41 PM
RE: Need Some advice! on Poetry free verse - by Bridgehead - 02-07-2013, 06:00 AM



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