Pain makes people change.

Pain makes people change.

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02-05-2013, 11:08 AM

I like how the poem was arranged, I felt like I was falling from line to line, accelerating until I got to the first "I...", then slowed down again. I actually prefer the unedited version more, because I like the repetition of "fire". But that's just me. Smile

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Pain makes people change. - by newsclippings - 02-04-2013, 02:42 PM

RE: Pain makes people change. - by brandontoh - 02-04-2013, 02:55 PM

RE: Pain makes people change. - by newsclippings - 02-04-2013, 02:58 PM

RE: Pain makes people change. - by brandontoh - 02-04-2013, 03:00 PM

RE: Pain makes people change. - by newsclippings - 02-04-2013, 03:07 PM

RE: Pain makes people change. - by billy - 02-04-2013, 03:36 PM

RE: Pain makes people change. - by Jae Mc Donnell - 02-04-2013, 05:17 PM

RE: Pain makes people change. - by newsclippings - 02-05-2013, 08:55 AM

RE: Pain makes people change. - by AisforApple - 02-05-2013, 11:08 AM

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