02-04-2013, 08:40 AM
(02-04-2013, 08:12 AM)hamartia Wrote: ETA: Oh, also, I ought to ask - on revision, would I post the poem in the forums for stronger critiques, or continue in the novice one? I'm happy to take harsher feedback, perhaps prefer it in fact, but I don't want to be out of step with the way the site works. Certainly not so early on, at any rate!Have a look around the other forums and get a feel for the level of scrutiny and kind of critiques -- try dropping a few comments of your own around the place as well. This sort of writing wouldn't be out of place in other forums at all -- you won't get in-depth critique in Novice (we don't like scaring away beginners!). When you do post, it's often best to put the revised version in your original post, above the first version, just so readers can see the editing process (which is of benefit to everyone). If you feel comfortable revising and throwing yourself to the wolves (!), just PM one of the mods who can always move this entire thread to the forum of your choice, or you can just revise here if you like.
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