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London Plane
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02-04-2013, 08:37 AM
Hello! Thanks for reading, and the advice! I see what you mean about the second stanza - I agree that that part is somewhat superfluous, I suppose if I had to justify it I'd say that the aim was to suggest a life in front of her, as opposed to just... I don't know, shape-shifting. Still, the longer I look at it the longer I want to change it, so thank you for pointing it out
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London Plane - by hamartia - 02-04-2013, 07:17 AM
RE: London Plane - by Leanne - 02-04-2013, 07:56 AM
RE: London Plane - by hamartia - 02-04-2013, 08:12 AM
RE: London Plane - by abu nuwas - 02-04-2013, 08:21 AM
RE: London Plane - by hamartia - 02-04-2013, 08:37 AM
RE: London Plane - by abu nuwas - 02-04-2013, 10:00 AM
RE: London Plane - by Leanne - 02-04-2013, 08:40 AM
RE: London Plane - by hamartia - 02-04-2013, 08:45 AM
RE: London Plane - by billy - 02-04-2013, 03:27 PM
RE: London Plane - by hamartia - 02-06-2013, 11:33 AM
RE: London Plane - by lolo - 02-08-2013, 11:29 PM
RE: London Plane - by hamartia - 02-09-2013, 10:29 AM
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