02-03-2013, 09:05 PM
(02-03-2013, 08:57 PM)Todd Wrote: Some nice choices here .Jack. I liked your use of appropriate harm, and your final image is stunning. The tone is what makes it work for me. It has the moral black and white rightness of the older mystery novel. Strangling is met with hanging. The old tea line is great. Chintzy is such a great descriptor. We have become too sophisticated for the crassness of punishment.Thank you for your kind feedback, Todd
No nits from me.
Best,
Todd
I had to Google "chintzy" to make sure it was a real word
I'm glad the tone was consistent; it's something I feel like I struggle with.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

