Comforting Christie
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(02-03-2013, 08:57 PM)Todd Wrote:  Some nice choices here .Jack. I liked your use of appropriate harm, and your final image is stunning. The tone is what makes it work for me. It has the moral black and white rightness of the older mystery novel. Strangling is met with hanging. The old tea line is great. Chintzy is such a great descriptor. We have become too sophisticated for the crassness of punishment.

No nits from me.

Best,

Todd
Thank you for your kind feedback, ToddSmile I had to Google "chintzy" to make sure it was a real wordBig Grin I'm glad the tone was consistent; it's something I feel like I struggle with.
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Comforting Christie - by heslopian - 02-03-2013, 07:38 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by serge gurkski - 02-03-2013, 07:49 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by heslopian - 02-03-2013, 07:54 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by serge gurkski - 02-03-2013, 07:58 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by heslopian - 02-03-2013, 08:00 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by serge gurkski - 02-03-2013, 08:42 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by heslopian - 02-03-2013, 08:46 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by serge gurkski - 02-03-2013, 08:50 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by Todd - 02-03-2013, 08:57 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by heslopian - 02-03-2013, 09:05 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by serge gurkski - 02-03-2013, 08:59 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by Todd - 02-03-2013, 09:07 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by serge gurkski - 02-03-2013, 09:10 PM



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