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Comforting Christie

Comforting Christie
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02-03-2013, 07:49 PM
Amazing!

Maybe I would go without your first sentence but simply love this:

"A shot would be heard
as Poirot wrapped up, implying appropriate harm."

cheers
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Comforting Christie - by heslopian - 02-03-2013, 07:38 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by serge gurkski - 02-03-2013, 07:49 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by heslopian - 02-03-2013, 07:54 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by serge gurkski - 02-03-2013, 07:58 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by heslopian - 02-03-2013, 08:00 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by serge gurkski - 02-03-2013, 08:42 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by heslopian - 02-03-2013, 08:46 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by serge gurkski - 02-03-2013, 08:50 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by Todd - 02-03-2013, 08:57 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by heslopian - 02-03-2013, 09:05 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by serge gurkski - 02-03-2013, 08:59 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by Todd - 02-03-2013, 09:07 PM
RE: Comforting Christie - by serge gurkski - 02-03-2013, 09:10 PM



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