01-31-2013, 03:34 PM
hey guys. very new here and new to writing poetry. here goes
love ain’t blind
her Eyes were craters
begging to be explored,
deep enough to send echoes
bouncing from wall to wall
awkwardly reintroducing themselves,
unable to escape a feeling of past
intimacy. (intimacy)
non-flickering and sating,
they are the “open” sign
at 1:14 am, lost
on the empty road
from M to E.
candy Pupils, wrapped
in dark chocolate, potent
with shielding agents.
her smirked Brow an upstretched
pinball flipper
waiting to catch my gaze.
to send me flying.
shes gotta get that high score.
the align thing messed me up, dont know how to indent/tab.
thanks for your time! im very open minded so keep it brutal
love ain’t blind
her Eyes were craters
begging to be explored,
deep enough to send echoes
bouncing from wall to wall
awkwardly reintroducing themselves,
unable to escape a feeling of past
intimacy. (intimacy)
non-flickering and sating,
they are the “open” sign
at 1:14 am, lost
on the empty road
from M to E.
candy Pupils, wrapped
in dark chocolate, potent
with shielding agents.
her smirked Brow an upstretched
pinball flipper
waiting to catch my gaze.
she might cradle me for just a second.
(and if i were a humming bird id do the cha-cha 6 times in that second)
then her cheeky Smile whispersto send me flying.
shes gotta get that high score.
the align thing messed me up, dont know how to indent/tab.
thanks for your time! im very open minded so keep it brutal