Apple Juice and Vodka
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Thank you both! It's the first poem I've posted here, so the positive reception is very appreciated. brandontoh, a more detailed critique would be great!
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Apple Juice and Vodka - by AisforApple - 01-30-2013, 01:26 PM
RE: Apple Juice and Vodka - by brandontoh - 01-30-2013, 10:31 PM
RE: Apple Juice and Vodka - by rowens - 01-31-2013, 12:39 AM
RE: Apple Juice and Vodka - by AisforApple - 01-31-2013, 12:42 AM
RE: Apple Juice and Vodka - by brandontoh - 01-31-2013, 08:30 AM
RE: Apple Juice and Vodka - by billy - 01-31-2013, 09:11 AM
RE: Apple Juice and Vodka - by Wildcard - 01-31-2013, 09:24 AM
RE: Apple Juice and Vodka - by AisforApple - 01-31-2013, 03:38 PM



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