01-29-2013, 12:14 AM
The rhymes are very forced on this one. It seems too simplistic. On one hand you're painting a simplistic picture; and that's fine. But what more, if anything, would you like to accomplish with it?
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RE: Gods Plan - by rowens - 01-29-2013, 12:14 AM
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