01-27-2013, 10:22 PM
(01-27-2013, 06:13 PM)Yelleryella123 Wrote:I think if you're going to do repetition in the first pair than you should consider repetition in the final pair. Maybe,If you believe there is no other way,
there is no other way to find
If you believe humanity is cursed,
it is only in your mind
the curse is in your mind.
I like this.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson