01-21-2013, 06:41 AM
Yeah with the stanza before it, 'Sentiment' and 'writiing' for her
but the second 'her'?
Though without periods, things get confused. As to what you mean. If there is no period, then it's still the same sentence, and 'for her' makes sense; but is it the same sentence continuing over to the next stanza? Or at least the same thought?
Because it seems confused so far as to whether or not your writing is unblurred for her. Maybe you're making a bold and valiant assumption; and that's not bad either.
See what I mean about how we get verbose...
I'll look at it again tomorrow.
but the second 'her'?
Though without periods, things get confused. As to what you mean. If there is no period, then it's still the same sentence, and 'for her' makes sense; but is it the same sentence continuing over to the next stanza? Or at least the same thought?
Because it seems confused so far as to whether or not your writing is unblurred for her. Maybe you're making a bold and valiant assumption; and that's not bad either.
See what I mean about how we get verbose...
I'll look at it again tomorrow.