01-17-2013, 10:07 AM
Well, it's a bit more near-rhyme, but I don't think you're always stuck in gear. I've seen some poems that switch. Don't be afraid of rhyme, just don't let it dictate your... diction.
Also, if you don't mind me saying so, your old picture was a bit too dark of a blue. I was more suggesting you change it because I thought it would look better without such a strong filter.
Also, it's kinda funny you said "no more blue" and put a big blue circle in. But a much prettier blue, though a bit of an odd placement.
Also, if you don't mind me saying so, your old picture was a bit too dark of a blue. I was more suggesting you change it because I thought it would look better without such a strong filter.
Also, it's kinda funny you said "no more blue" and put a big blue circle in. But a much prettier blue, though a bit of an odd placement.
Won't be seeing you through the field of tears I left behind