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Hi Card! Thanks so much for your comments. I'm taking it all in and still working on this one whenever I find the time. Hoping to have a significant revision very soon.

Not sure why my picture should matter at all, blue or no blue. I find if odd that it's been mentioned at all quite honestly - let alone twice. But all is well now since it's gone. No more blue. No more me. No more "distractions". Smile

Thanks again!
Mona

Hi Leanne!

Wow! Thank you so much for taking the time for such a thorough critique. Your advice is much appreciated. I need to look over the notes you made and see where I can take this poem. Can't wait to dig in and show something better soon.

Best and thanks again!
Mona
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Whole - by monablackbird - 01-16-2013, 11:41 PM
RE: Whole - by rowens - 01-17-2013, 01:16 AM
RE: Whole - by monablackbird - 01-17-2013, 01:25 AM
RE: Whole - by rowens - 01-17-2013, 01:33 AM
RE: Whole - by monablackbird - 01-17-2013, 01:42 AM
RE: Whole - by Card - 01-17-2013, 06:29 AM
RE: Whole - by Leanne - 01-17-2013, 07:26 AM
RE: Whole - by monablackbird - 01-17-2013, 07:27 AM
RE: Whole - by Leanne - 01-17-2013, 07:32 AM
RE: Whole - by monablackbird - 01-17-2013, 07:36 AM
RE: Whole - by Card - 01-17-2013, 10:07 AM
RE: Whole - by monablackbird - 01-17-2013, 10:14 AM



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