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[rowens]

I think you can free yourself up from worrying about rhymes, and try other devices, and get the content and the images, and so on, nice and the way you like. Then come back and see if adding rhymes is worth it, after you've tried other things. But I always say that to people, in these situations.--Another thing is that your picture kept distracting me from the poem. I kept looking up at it and drifting off into other thoughts. You have to deal with that, when your picture is looking better than the poem!