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[monablackbird]

Rowens, thanks for your comments. I feel that choppiness you're talking about too. I'm not sure why I'm even rhyming my poetry lately. I usually stay away from rhymes all together. Anyway... I'm going to keep working on this one though I'm hoping a fresh set of eyes can take me away from this rhyme train I'm on. It feels a bit like being in a box to tell a story from memory when all I can hear are rhyming words. Thanks again and no worries. If you think of anything more later on, I'd love to hear it.