The Wise Mumble

[rowens]

It seemed that way. A wise mumble. This poem has that going for it. But if you keep writing, it would be interesting if you gave a lot of thought to some of the things mentioned here in passing, and give us a poem about them. Take those feelings about these things, and expand the thought into more"ill-minded" thoughts, then craft them into poetry.

The hipsters, the consumer society, the "inner me", and all the rest.

Get a grip on that crazy shit and whip it into shape. Counter realities.