01-15-2013, 12:32 AM
@Rowens- I'm 23 and I am very much scatter-brained(if that's a word lol) the image of my mind going a thousand miles a minute is sort of what i wanted to create but i will try and implement your advice and slow down to make clear concise points
@Todd- Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it and no your edits don't seem like too much i knew there were going to be some problems when i wrote it. I will work out the kinks and repost when i feel i made a proper revision
@Todd- Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it and no your edits don't seem like too much i knew there were going to be some problems when i wrote it. I will work out the kinks and repost when i feel i made a proper revision