The Man Who Couldn't Rhyme
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Hey Benny,
I agree with the other comments, it would have been a bit of a good twist (you know how much I like those)
I do like some of the ideas:

My Introspection
is masturbation

My addiction
iinternal creation

I think of poetry
Not as a part of me

Those to me make your point, I think you should build the poem around the thought behind those.
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The Man Who Couldn't Rhyme - by BennyBoy - 01-13-2013, 02:23 PM
RE: The Man Who Couldn't Rhyme - by Todd - 01-13-2013, 02:30 PM
RE: The Man Who Couldn't Rhyme - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 02:31 PM
RE: The Man Who Couldn't Rhyme - by BennyBoy - 01-13-2013, 02:36 PM
RE: The Man Who Couldn't Rhyme - by arbil_poieo - 01-13-2013, 02:44 PM



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