01-13-2013, 02:44 PM
Hey Benny,
I agree with the other comments, it would have been a bit of a good twist (you know how much I like those)
I do like some of the ideas:
My Introspection
is masturbation
My addiction
iinternal creation
I think of poetry
Not as a part of me
Those to me make your point, I think you should build the poem around the thought behind those.
I agree with the other comments, it would have been a bit of a good twist (you know how much I like those)
I do like some of the ideas:
My Introspection
is masturbation
My addiction
iinternal creation
I think of poetry
Not as a part of me
Those to me make your point, I think you should build the poem around the thought behind those.

