My dreams.

[EmmaOline]

I don't care what you think.
My dreams are mine.
Be scared to use one second to blink.
In that second, i'll suddenly shine.

I don't care for your laws
You won't ever bring me down
Only you can se my flaws
I won't need you to serve my crown

I don't believe your stories
You are not the person to trust
I don't even need your sorries
I'll rule your world with fame and lust

I dont wanna use more time on you
Im going to live out my dreams
Nothing you ever said was true
From heaven i'll laugh at your screams

[jferrell]

I don't know a lot about poetry as I've recently started writing myself. However, I will say that I enjoyed this poem thoroughly. I thought it was written in an enjoyable prose and I felt I could understand your intentions behind it. Like I said, I'm a newbie so I can't offer any constructive criticism but I think you should know that I enjoyed it.

[rowens]

This seems all right to me. The mistakes in it might be on purpose or real mistakes, but anyway they don't really seem important when you listen to what the poem's saying.