The Man Who Couldn't Rhyme
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I tend to agree with Todd. I would love to see you set up the obvious and then go with the non-rhyme... you know, like end a line in duck and set up the next one to be... well, you get the picture Wink

PS. All poetry is masturbation, don't you know?
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The Man Who Couldn't Rhyme - by BennyBoy - 01-13-2013, 02:23 PM
RE: The Man Who Couldn't Rhyme - by Todd - 01-13-2013, 02:30 PM
RE: The Man Who Couldn't Rhyme - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 02:31 PM
RE: The Man Who Couldn't Rhyme - by BennyBoy - 01-13-2013, 02:36 PM
RE: The Man Who Couldn't Rhyme - by arbil_poieo - 01-13-2013, 02:44 PM



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