01-12-2013, 04:14 PM
love it!
Why?
Because i read it aloud (skip accents)
and your poem is growing by the line.
It is a Blues.
I don't care about rhymes. If you need them go for 'em.
But I am all into vocal dynamics and this text takes up speed by the line.
Thank you for the read.
(derp is a fine title)
cheers
serge
Why?
Because i read it aloud (skip accents)
and your poem is growing by the line.
It is a Blues.
I don't care about rhymes. If you need them go for 'em.
But I am all into vocal dynamics and this text takes up speed by the line.
Thank you for the read.
(derp is a fine title)
cheers
serge