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[billy]

Hey Billy,
Aww shucks, it was a hilarious and solid read.
My 2 nits are a comma after "They'd blow their pointy poison darts" and "the tiny buggers never hit"

I like the transition from running from being dinner to being a dessert
"She drizzled jam upon my ham/it stood proud, it wasn't picky" very good innuendo, which made it that much more funny.
This had adventure, escaping from stew and a happy ending all in one, who could ask for more? Entertaining read, but also clever.

thanks for the feedback ash will sort it out in a minute

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"but I've been in situations
that'd scare a sickly parrot."

this seems forced -- as though you needed a rhyme

thanks for the feedback NC i'll see if i can improve it.