Pain Release
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Very sad, but I like how it's written and how you approached this. With the narrator having some pride, but yet regretful with pain.

"teasingly stroking me without laying a hand on me"---a lovely image that paints a clear picture of love but confusion.
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Pain Release - by Arriedo - 01-09-2013, 08:04 AM
RE: Pain Release - by arbil_poieo - 01-09-2013, 08:35 AM
RE: Pain Release - by newsclippings - 01-09-2013, 05:43 PM



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