01-09-2013, 08:35 AM
Very sad, but I like how it's written and how you approached this. With the narrator having some pride, but yet regretful with pain.
"teasingly stroking me without laying a hand on me"---a lovely image that paints a clear picture of love but confusion.
"teasingly stroking me without laying a hand on me"---a lovely image that paints a clear picture of love but confusion.

