When Time Froze

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When Time Froze

Poppy
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01-06-2013, 08:31 AM

I think there is still room to expand on this.
You offer the reader lots of imagery - but never really tell us why she is running on borrowed time.

Writing is art in pictures – Go paint poetry!

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When Time Froze - by brandontoh - 01-04-2013, 02:13 AM

RE: When Time Froze - by Poppy - 01-06-2013, 08:31 AM

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