01-05-2013, 08:14 AM
(12-25-2012, 05:20 PM)WtheTiger Wrote: Girls on fireit reads like a nonsense poem which okay but it needs more of the same and a bit more depth. i also think you could tie it into the title a bit more.
And that's my business
People going everywhere
Cuz that's their religion
Duckies going hunting
They're shooting at hunters
The world is backwards
Not upside down
