young, drunk, and cocky
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(12-25-2012, 05:20 PM)WtheTiger Wrote:  Girls on fire
And that's my business

People going everywhere
Cuz that's their religion

Duckies going hunting
They're shooting at hunters

The world is backwards
Not upside down
it reads like a nonsense poem which okay but it needs more of the same and a bit more depth. i also think you could tie it into the title a bit more.
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