Dear Nat

[Todd]

You accomplished the note on the fridge. Unfortunately, the note on the fridge as it stands is not providing (only in my opinion) a satisfying conclusion. The I forgot to get bread line might still work. Some idea of the note ending but your life together not ending. I don't really have any ideas. I mean WCW did the plum note so notes can work...just however you do it have your last line be powerful. If you want to do the bread line and the tomorrow line fine...but come up with something at the end that has more resonance.

Just a thought, don't know if that helps.