Dear Nat
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(01-03-2013, 10:06 AM)brandontoh Wrote:  For some reason I get a really creeped out feel when I read this poem. Ishtar what you're trying to get at? Because I'm legitimately creeped out by the character.
Is there any specific phrase or lines that give you this feeling? It wasn't exactly what I was going for.
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Dear Nat - by KbPoetry - 01-02-2013, 03:02 PM
RE: Dear Nat - by brandontoh - 01-03-2013, 10:06 AM
RE: Dear Nat - by KbPoetry - 01-03-2013, 12:47 PM
RE: Dear Nat - by brandontoh - 01-03-2013, 12:56 PM
RE: Dear Nat - by KbPoetry - 01-03-2013, 01:03 PM
RE: Dear Nat - by brandontoh - 01-03-2013, 01:08 PM
RE: Dear Nat - by Todd - 01-04-2013, 06:08 AM
RE: Dear Nat - by KbPoetry - 01-04-2013, 06:21 AM
RE: Dear Nat - by Todd - 01-04-2013, 06:33 AM



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