A Tear Shreds

[DaedricPrince]

Alright, thanks! Criticism is always welcome.

Now, to the point. I am not writing in any form of poetic writing. I don't want to write in any form. When you read this, it's terrible because it doesn't make sense. Right? Good. That's how it was meant to be.

I want the reader to use logical thinking in order to figure out the explanation of the poem. Which you would do in other poems.

But anyways, read my other poems! Most of the poems I write are first drafted. So I don't really change em.

Hi,

A couple quick things:

Readers will not spend the time attempting to interpret a poem that lacks clarity. If you wrote it so that it doesn't make sense, honestly, it's a waste of time to read.

More importantly though if you don't look to change your poems then you aren't looking to revise, and you should probably post in Poetry for Fun or Miscellaneous Poetry because revision is the purpose of the critique forums.

Hello, sir

Quick note to clarify: No. The point of the forum all together is to extend your skills. To continue creating your world of imaginations with other poems. To understand poetry.

That said, no. I don't want to post in other places. Because? I want serious reviews. Yes, my poems my be of low interest, but I want to know why that is. Kinda sucks though. People don't want to make the writer feel bad, so they choose not to do a serious review.

Anyways. Revision. Blah. The world is filled with tremendous writers. Shakespeare and such. The problem with this world today, is people focus on one thing. One simple thing, and they just won't move on. Creativity, Imagination, and Uniqueness, built this world. Point is, I want to create poems that are different. Not the same as the poems you would see today. Something...different.

So this is just the start of it. The start.