A Tear Shreds

[Todd]

Alright, thanks! Criticism is always welcome.

Now, to the point. I am not writing in any form of poetic writing. I don't want to write in any form. When you read this, it's terrible because it doesn't make sense. Right? Good. That's how it was meant to be.

I want the reader to use logical thinking in order to figure out the explanation of the poem. Which you would do in other poems.

But anyways, read my other poems! Most of the poems I write are first drafted. So I don't really change em.

Hi,

A couple quick things:

Readers will not spend the time attempting to interpret a poem that lacks clarity. If you wrote it so that it doesn't make sense, honestly, it's a waste of time to read.

More importantly though if you don't look to change your poems then you aren't looking to revise, and you should probably post in Poetry for Fun or Miscellaneous Poetry because revision is the purpose of the critique forums.